There is something in you,
That steals me away from me!
A stoic silence and, words that are few
Make the distant between us look like a Sea.
The Blue Sea and the Virgin Rocks
Want to tell their own tale,
Or is it our own story?
Wonder we as the wave falls pale.
The wave rises time and again,
Telling me that now you are near,
The distance gets closer and closer
Akin, an eye calling back a dropped tear!
Tears –are what best seals the love we share
We will never be scorned again,
Coz the heart now wants to scream
“Can’t let the wait go in Vain!”
The wait, wants to fly and touch the sky
Is begging for another wing,
I almost feel like giving in,
Coz , I know…there is something!
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There is something in you,
That steals me away from me!
A stoic silence and, words that are few looks of your eyes make me fall in ocean blue.....
need more editing
Tears – are what best seals the love we share
We will never be scorned again,
Coz the heart now wants to scream
“Can’t let the wait go in Vain!”
- Hmmmmmm
Thought provoking.
The feeling of love is so omnipresent, yet misunderstood and in lot of ways retort!
But no other feeling can overpower those tears of immense feeling of belonging to someone!
@Anonymous: Really??? I don't really think so...
@Ajay: thanks for grabbing the essence of the poem.
Thanks!
I loved your blog!
Keep Writing!
TC!
Ajay
@Juhi,
Purity of wordings appeal to heart in one go...quite touching one in the sense reflects the state of mind while composing...
Gud one indeed!!!
Hi Juhi,
Great Poem....very mysterious...
Gop
Thanks Gopa!!! This coming from you means a lot :)
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